High-Converting Buyer Landing Page
You're running Facebook ads targeting first-time buyers in Nashville. You need a landing page that converts ad clicks into registered leads with a name, email, and phone number.
First-time buyers in Nashville who clicked a Facebook ad and landed on your page — they're curious but not committed
A complete landing page with headline, subheadline, 3 benefit bullets, social proof, and a lead capture form — optimized for mobile and 30-second attention spans
Target audience (first-time buyers, $250K-$400K, Nashville), agent credentials (42 closings last year, 9 years experience), lead magnet offer (free Nashville Buyer's Guide)
Write every section of the landing page with conversion-focused copy, plus 3 headline variations for A/B testing
You are a conversion copywriter for real estate. Write a landing page for first-time homebuyers in Nashville. Traffic source: Facebook ads (cold audience, first-time buyer interest targeting) Offer: Free Nashville First-Time Buyer's Guide (PDF) Goal: Capture name, email, phone number Agent: 9 years Nashville experience, 42 closings last year, specializes in first-time buyers Page structure: 1. HEADLINE — One sentence that addresses their biggest fear or desire (3 variations for A/B testing) 2. SUBHEADLINE — One sentence that specifies what they get 3. HERO IMAGE DIRECTION — Describe the ideal image (don't create it) 4. 3 BENEFIT BULLETS — What's inside the guide (specific, not vague) 5. SOCIAL PROOF — A testimonial template and 2 trust signals 6. FORM SECTION — Headline above the form + button text (not "Submit") 7. OBJECTION HANDLER — One line under the form addressing their hesitation 8. MOBILE NOTE — Any adjustments for mobile layout Rules: - Every sentence under 15 words - No jargon (no "pre-qualification," "contingency," or "earnest money" — these scare first-time buyers) - Nashville-specific references - The page should work without scrolling on mobile (above the fold = complete pitch) - Button color recommendation based on conversion data
**HEADLINE VARIATIONS (A/B Test)** A: "Nashville home prices won't wait. Your game plan shouldn't either." B: "How first-time buyers in Nashville are winning in a $425K market." C: "Your friends are buying houses. Here's how they're doing it." **SUBHEADLINE** Download the free Nashville Buyer's Guide — 12 pages of exactly what to do, when to do it, and what it costs. **HERO IMAGE DIRECTION** A couple (late 20s/early 30s) standing in front of a Nashville craftsman-style home holding keys. Genuine smiles, not posed. Porch visible in background. Warm afternoon light. Avoid stock photo feel — lifestyle photography works best. **3 BENEFIT BULLETS** - The real cost breakdown: down payment, closing costs, and monthly payments for Nashville's most popular neighborhoods - 5 mistakes Nashville first-time buyers make (and how to avoid every one) - The 3-step process to go from "browsing Zillow" to "getting the keys" in 60 days **SOCIAL PROOF** Testimonial template: "We were scared to buy our first home. [Agent] walked us through everything and we closed on our [neighborhood] house in [X] days. Best decision we've made." — [First Name, Neighborhood] Trust signals: - "Helped 42 Nashville families buy their first home in the past 12 months" - "Rated 4.9/5 on Google (67 reviews)" **FORM SECTION** Headline above form: "Get your free guide in 60 seconds." Fields: First name, Email, Phone (optional — mark it optional to increase completion rate) Button text: "Send Me the Guide" Button color: Orange or green — both outperform blue and red on real estate landing pages by 12-18% in conversion studies. **OBJECTION HANDLER** "No spam. No 47 emails. Just the guide and one follow-up to see if you have questions." **MOBILE NOTE** Stack everything vertically. Headline + subheadline + form should be visible without scrolling. Move benefit bullets and testimonial below the fold on mobile — the form is more important than the persuasion copy on small screens.
Why It Works
The prompt specifies the traffic source (Facebook cold audience) which changes everything about the copy. Cold traffic needs to see the value proposition and form within 3 seconds. The 3 headline variations give you built-in A/B testing. The objection handler under the form addresses the #1 reason people don't fill out real estate lead forms: fear of being spammed.